Hello dear Authors, my name is Reliance. As an editor on Alphanovel, I’ve seen firsthand the incredible stories writers bring to life. Whether you’re a first-time writer or a seasoned storyteller, there’s always room to grow. Let’s talk about a few key ways you can sharpen your craft and keep your readers hooked.
1. Start with a Bang
The first few lines of your story are everything. They’re what draw your readers in—or lose them. Try opening with a scene that sparks questions or a moment that sets the tone right away.
Example:
“Lena’s hand shook as she read the letter. The words were simple, but the final line stole her breath: ‘I know your secret.’”
A hook like this pulls the reader in immediately.
2. Show, Don’t Just Tell
We’ve all heard this advice, but it’s so important. Instead of spelling out that someone’s scared or angry, paint a picture.
Example:
“Sweat trickled down her spine as she fumbled with the lock, footsteps echoing closer.”
You feel her panic without ever having to say “She was scared.”
3. Characters That Feel Real
Characters are the heart of your story. Give them layers—dreams, fears, flaws. Let them stumble and grow.
Example:
“Leo hated how his voice cracked when he was nervous. But tonight, he had to prove he wasn’t just the class clown. He cleared his throat and stepped up to the mic.”
We instantly see his vulnerability and his determination to be seen for who he really is.
4. Mind Your Pacing
Good stories have a rhythm. Mix up slower, more introspective moments with bursts of action or tension to keep things fresh.
Example:
A quiet moment: “Mila traced the names carved into the old tree, memories flooding back.”
An intense moment: “Sirens screamed behind her as she sprinted across the rooftop, breath ragged.”
5. Let Dialogue Breathe
Dialogue should sound like real people talking, not stiff or overly formal. Let your characters’ personalities come through in what they say—and what they don’t.
Example:
“You okay?” he asked.
“Yeah,” she said, twisting the hem of her shirt.
What she’s saying doesn’t quite match how she’s acting—there’s so much more happening beneath the surface.
6. Edit Without Mercy
Your first draft is just that—a draft. Don’t be afraid to cut scenes that don’t move the story forward or rework sentences that don’t flow.
Example:
First draft: “He walked in and saw her sitting there. She looked up, and he noticed how sad she looked.”
Revised: “He stepped inside. She looked up, her eyes rimmed red with tears.”
Cleaner, tighter, and more powerful.
7. Get Feedback
Even the best writers need fresh eyes on their work. Sharing your story with trusted friends or editors can highlight things you might have missed—and make your story that much stronger.
Example:
“I thought my pacing was fine until my editor pointed out that the middle chapters dragged. Cutting some scenes made the ending so much more impactful.”
Writing isn’t about getting it perfect the first time—it’s about finding your voice and sharing your story. Don’t be afraid to take risks, dig deep, and keep refining. You never know which story might resonate most with your readers.
If you’re ready to share your story, Alphanovel is the perfect place to start. Submit your work and let your voice be heard—we’re always excited to see what new worlds and characters you bring to life.
Happy writing!
The post was written by our esteemed editor, Reliance Okpara.
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