As authors, one of the greatest challenges we face is crafting truly unique plots, stories filled with magical settings, jaw-dropping twists, and heart-stopping moments. We chase that spark of originality, hoping our novel will become unforgettable to anyone who picks it up.
We often spend weeks or even months gathering information, building entire worlds, sketching out characters, and weaving together intricate plot twists and story arcs. And once all the pieces seem to fall into place, we feel ready to write.
But then something happens.
When we share our story with the world—whether it’s through an editor’s feedback or when the first reader’s reactions start trickling in, we may come to a hard realization: our novel hasn’t had the impact we hoped for.
Despite a plot that shows real promise, the story somehow falls flat. It lacks emotional depth. One scene grips the reader, only for the next to feel flat. The pacing becomes inconsistent, and then the tension slowly fades. And we’re left wondering: what went wrong?
It turns out that crafting a compelling story goes far beyond just having a “good plot.” The real magic lies in how that plot unfolds through meaningful character development and emotional resonance. A strong premise is only the foundation; depth is what brings it to life.
So, what gives a story its depth? How can we ensure our brilliant plot doesn’t fall short when it truly matters? Let’s explore what it really takes to write a story that resonates.
1: Why the Small Details Make or Break Your Novel
As authors, when we craft a story, we spend most of our time and energy on the plot itself, forgetting that the “minor things,” such as character building, opening scenes, and the distribution of the plot into chapters, are what most often carry the novel’s potential.
Powerful ideas that can help your novel thrive.
- Develop the characters’ backstory: remember that readers read to identify, not to feel perfect. As human beings, we connect best with those who understand our flaws. Build imperfect characters.
- Opening scenes: overwhelm the reader in the first 5 chapters will make them abandon the experience. You don’t need a shocking opening to your story. We connect with emotions, not scenes.
- Cliffhangers at the end of chapters: Cliffhangers at the end of each chapter, frequently, are a double-edged sword. We want readers to stay for the development of our characters and the story, not for the cliffhangers we offer.
2: Why Your Story Shouldn’t Follow a Straight Line
When we say a story “shouldn’t just fall in a straight line,” we’re talking about how predictable or emotionally flat a narrative can become if it moves too smoothly from point A to point B. If the plot progresses in a straight, obvious path with no surprises, tension, or emotional fluctuations it risks losing the reader’s interest.
What Does a “Straight Line” Story Look Like?
- The protagonist faces a challenge and solves it without much resistance.
- Events unfold in a perfectly logical order without any detours or surprises.
- Characters don’t face internal struggles or moral dilemmas.
- There’s little tension or uncertainty about what will happen next.
While clarity and structure are important, too much predictability can drain the energy from your story.
What Your Story Needs Instead
To add depth to your story, it needs:
- Twists and Turns:
Unexpected developments that surprise the reader. A twist can be a sudden betrayal, a sudden revelation, or an unforeseen consequence. These moments create excitement and keep readers invested.
- Conflict and Complications:
Nothing should come too easily for your characters. Challenges—both internal and external—force growth and deepen the plot.
- Misdirection and Mystery:
Keep readers guessing. They should want to turn the page not because they know what’s coming, but because they don’t.
Writing a book is about enjoying the process, living the story, sharing feelings, fears and desires with our characters.
To wrap a book is to wrap part of ourselves. So don’t rush it. Take your time, write with heart, and make sure you’ve said everything you want to say. When it feels right, that’s when you know it’s done.
Happy writing!
Alejandra
